Setting yourself apart is an art
Let’s say we’re in a room full of 100 people. We look around, and everyone seems fairly different, right? But before knowing a thing about anyone else, we are all basically the same… just people in a room together. Now, what if we try to segment the 100 people into categories? For example, we might ask the question, “Who likes to cook?” Let’s say that 25 people raise their hands. Now these 25 people are different from the other 75 who would rather be swimming in a pool of jellyfish than cracking open a cookbook. Those 25 people, though, are now all the same – they like to cook. So let’s delve into this a bit further. Let’s ask around to see what specific dishes these people like to cook:
Ella – “I love making my grandma’s meatball recipe!”
Jayne – “I always make my homemade chicken noodle soup when my kids come home for Thanksgiving.”
Cameron – “I make chicken parm once a week.”
Matt – “A tuna melt is about the only thing I can make, but it’s pretty delicious, if I do say so myself.”
Clarissa – “I don’t cook for myself, but I love making my dog homemade treats.”
The five people above have now differentiated themselves, first from the larger group, and now from the 25-person subset because each likes to cook something very different from the others. Who would you rather go on a date with: Someone who says he likes to cook, or someone who says he makes the best lasagna outside of Italy? I’d venture to say the latter.
In your online dating profile, it’s very important to differentiate yourself to the point where people can see you for you and not assume you’re just like everyone else. Let’s look at these two profiles excerpts:
I love to laugh and have fun. My family and friends are so important to me, and I always try to be there for them when I can. I love to cook, run, and play with my dog.
When I’m not chasing my dog all the way to the dog park every morning (trust me – he’s fast!), I love hosting family and friends for dinner. It gives me great pride to make my late grandma’s meatball recipe for every holiday. The best advice she ever gave to me was to use a whole stick of butter in everything I make. Maybe it’s a good thing I get my exercise by running every morning… even if I can never catch Scooby!
The first profile doesn’t tell us much. It lists a few hobbies, but on the whole, it’s pretty nondescript. The second profile, however, really gives us a sense of who this person is – someone silly and family-loving who loves to cook and who has an abnormally fast dog. That’s someone people want to meet!
So look around the room, and if you think you might be writing the same profile as the person next to you, it’s time to get more specific. There’s an art to setting yourself apart, and now you’re well-equipped with the skills to do it.
Erika Ettin is the Founder of A Little Nudge, where she helps people navigate the world of online dating. Her services include: writing unique profiles to get you noticed, helping to choose your best profile pictures, writing one-of-a-kind emails to get someone’s attention, and planning dates. A Little Nudge has been featured in The Washington Post, NPR, Talk Philly, Good Day Philadelphia, JMag (JDate's online magazine), and Ask Men. Want to connect with Erika? Join her newsletter for updates and tips